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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The converse clearly represents taking that step. I like the fact that there is only one, rather than a pair. It ties in with the concept of there being only one more step to take. You have also used the colour red very effectively to represent love in this photograph, and I love the fact that you have also chosen a red converse. Great use of colour, and it really strengthens the concept, and stands out against the background.
As far as composition is concerned, I'm very impressed. I think everything is very well positioned. It's one of those photographs which you can look at and just get the instinct that it looks "right". I love the different lengths of chalk, and the pattern that they create - the red of the converse, then the white chalk, then the red chalk, then the white writing.
Also with the composition, I like the fact that the converse partially hides the rest of the path. When we take that last step, we often have no idea of what lies ahead.
I hope you do well in the competition. Let us know how that goes! I only just realised , by the way, that you are only 14 years old! It's incredible that at that age you have already developed great photography skills, and you are capable of convincingly handling diffcult and detailed concepts! I am absolutely certain that you have a very bright future ahead of you.
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